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Legal Beagle: A draft submission on the Harmful Digital Communications (Unauthorised Posting of Intimate Visual Recording) Amendment Bill

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  • Tim McKenzie,

    For once, I have written my submission on a bill with enough time to spare to ... give you time to spot the typos ...

    I thank the committee for the opportunity to make a written submission on [the] Harmful Digital Communications (Unauthorised Posting of Intimate Visual Recording) Amendment Bill ...

    I am instead raising the following as something that the Committee may wish to think about, and seek further input [on] from departmental advisers.

    (Unless you cherish a certain superstition about prepositions, in which case you'll need to untangle this yourself.)

    ... fixing an issue that will arise ~~is~~ in a small number of prosecutions ...

    Lower Hutt • Since Apr 2007 • 125 posts Report Reply

  • linger,

    Pretty good actually, I didn't notice any additional points
    (assuming the correction for the last one is to replace "is" with "in").

    Tokyo • Since Apr 2007 • 1940 posts Report Reply

  • Paul Hutton,

    "as intensely personal questions around the affect the posting has" should be "effect".

    Christchurch • Since Jan 2019 • 1 posts Report Reply

  • Hamish.MacEwan,

    "the biscuit tim?"

    Wellington • Since Nov 2006 • 14 posts Report Reply

  • Sacha, in reply to Hamish.MacEwan,

    not to be confused with the tam

    Ak • Since May 2008 • 19740 posts Report Reply

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